Thursday, January 22, 2009

a terrible song...DONT ask me to sing it

could you whisper in my ear
all the things i want to hear
to make the pictures go away?
go, away.
i dont want to feel it anymore
dont want to feel a thing
then there you are,
and i feel it all.

do you wake up on your own
and wonder where you are
and how you live with all your faults
i wanna wake up where you are

those things you take back
are said and done
you cant change anything now
everything is gone
now when you play it back
those things you felt, you saw
arent real nor fake
just there
you want to call them memories
are they supposed to hurt?
the taste of salt still runs hot
and then you came along

do you wake up on your own
and wonder where you are
and how you live with all your faults
i wanna wake up where you are

ive seen high and ive seen low
but never have i ever felt a love like yours
i want it, need it, need you
too much at once
cant think straight
falling
gone

please say those things
so i can sleep
i want to know youll be there
dont leave me here
by myself
like she did
please.

do you wake up on your own
and wonder where you are
and how you live with all your faults
i wanna wake up where you are
do you wake up on your own
and wonder where you are
and how you live with all your faults
i wanna wake up where you are

and ill do anything you ever
dreamed to be complete
little pieces of nothing that fell
put your arms around me
what you feel is what you are
and what you are is beautiful
i wanna wake up where you are
wanna wake up
wake up.



again its terrible i rushed through it but wanted it done by today. please dont ask me to sing it. i wont. and its deff not as good as the otheres cough.laurariley.cough


oh and it doesnt rhyme
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6 comments:

  1. RileyJanuary 22, 2009 at 8:47 PM

    dont worry, its beautiful. It's just important that you actually did it. And don't you know?, it doesn't have to rhyme.

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  2. melissaJanuary 23, 2009 at 4:19 PM

    can you sing it?
    jkjk

    it is so good you have no idea what you are talking about!
    lovee youu

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  3. lauraJanuary 23, 2009 at 4:32 PM

    teagennn soooo good! better then mineeeee! you have to sing it! do you have a tune

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  4. teagen marieJanuary 23, 2009 at 11:06 PM

    i dont want to

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  5. melissaJanuary 24, 2009 at 3:22 PM

    find a tune or sing it?

    because idc if you jsut sing it to us when we are in another room or something. it's to good to go unsung <3

    i love you
    and your amazing song writing abiltyy.

    oh and luara shut up! yours is amazingg as well!

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  6. teagen marieJanuary 25, 2009 at 11:18 AM

    haha oh theres a tune i just dont want to sing it

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